Amazing you wrote in the past tense and you made it so good and even better you use lots of commas and speech marks to describe who is talking and no spelling mistakes.
Wow! I really liked the plot. It leaves people questioning about the situation. such as why is he being tested? is he special? Has he got a power? Id like to read more.
Great Work Ben!! However some parts don’t flow very well it is like scene after scene after scene. I think the way you could fix this is by adding a bot more description! Otherwise no spelling mistakes so GREAT!!
Amazing you wrote in the past tense and you made it so good and even better you use lots of commas and speech marks to describe who is talking and no spelling mistakes.
Its present tense. 🙂
Wow! I really liked the plot. It leaves people questioning about the situation. such as why is he being tested? is he special? Has he got a power? Id like to read more.
Sorry it was not in past tense.
Good but there is a double thing you wrote at the beginning its really good
Great Work Ben!! However some parts don’t flow very well it is like scene after scene after scene. I think the way you could fix this is by adding a bot more description! Otherwise no spelling mistakes so GREAT!!
Great story ben, but the first part doesn’t really make sense, “Today Is The Day That I Awoke” Is In Mixed Tenses.
Still well Done 😀
Great cliff hanger
how did you manage to keep it in present tense
well done !!!!!!!