Its good but you have loads of incorrect spellings. But well done!
Its a nice introduction however, most of it doesn’t make much sense.
Good piece of writing but make sure you re-read your work “As you been attack his kindness” didn’t really make sense
Some parts of this paragraph does not make sense and there are spelling mistakes but I like your Idea of a costume that has jetpacks under the shoes.
Sounds like some hero, but you have a lot of incorrect spelling and sentences which don’t make sense. Otherwise you explained your heroes appearance and some of their moral. Good Work Zak
You didn’t say anything about his back story. 🙁
Thank You
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Its good but you have loads of incorrect spellings. But well done!
Its a nice introduction however, most of it doesn’t make much sense.
Good piece of writing but make sure you re-read your work “As you been attack his kindness” didn’t really make sense
Some parts of this paragraph does not make sense and there are spelling mistakes but I like your Idea of a costume that has jetpacks under the shoes.
Sounds like some hero, but you have a lot of incorrect spelling and sentences which don’t make sense. Otherwise you explained your heroes appearance and some of their moral. Good Work Zak
You didn’t say anything about his back story. 🙁
Thank You