You forgot most of the capital letters at the beginning of you sentences. I love how he is like a fish. I would like to know his origin. (were he came from)
There are spelling mistakes and you have not put your capital letters and full stops but otherwise good because you have told the appearance of the character.
You forgot most of the capital letters at the beginning of you sentences. I love how he is like a fish. I would like to know his origin. (were he came from)
You forgot the capital letter at the beginning and really good work.
There are spelling mistakes and you have not put your capital letters and full stops but otherwise good because you have told the appearance of the character.