Great imagination Anna Maria! A treasure chest full of tiny creatures which had been created by Layla and the Weather. I’ d like to know how. To improve your style a would begin thinking of varying the length of my sentences. Sometimes longer sentences with conjunctions are good to describe and add detail. However sometimes shorter sentences are easier or clearer to read. try not to use because so much.
Great work! Next time try and find a different font to make it easier to read 🙂
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Great imagination Anna Maria! A treasure chest full of tiny creatures which had been created by Layla and the Weather. I’ d like to know how. To improve your style a would begin thinking of varying the length of my sentences. Sometimes longer sentences with conjunctions are good to describe and add detail. However sometimes shorter sentences are easier or clearer to read. try not to use because so much.