Great work ben .I liked it as soon as I started to read it. And I liked how you mentioned that the children were weeping and did not know what to do. I think you could of used somting other than ‘I was knowing, twice.
Ben just saying to many I in the work but the way you get that felling he’s not coming back mead me sad. 🙂
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Great work ben .I liked it as soon as I started to read it. And I liked how you mentioned that the children were weeping and did not know what to do. I think you could of used somting other than ‘I was knowing, twice.
Ben just saying to many I in the work but the way you get that felling he’s not coming back mead me sad. 🙂