ALEX LUCKY!!!!!

Posted on January 28, 2015 by Deleted User
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15 Responses to ALEX LUCKY!!!!!

  1. malct says:
    January 29, 2015 at 3:12 pm

    I like that you used lots of punctuation in you writing
    by Teon

  2. dervi says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:13 pm

    Great story. however you used to many ‘I’s 🙂

  3. aliz says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:14 pm

    Excellent but it was hard to breath.

  4. Lise xx says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:21 pm

    Huh It was hard to breath? LOL

  5. Niyah says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:24 pm

    To Alex I like your work because your one is the best From Niyah

  6. dobso says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:26 pm

    You did well but there are 12 I.:)WELL DONE:)

  7. bolas says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:29 pm

    It was really good and interesting.

  8. aliz says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:35 pm

    Amazing Alex so good I have never seen something like it so emotional one of the best.

  9. mollt says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:35 pm

    Great work Alex. But I think you could use with some full stops or commas. I like your end sentence as no one thought about it.

  10. thomd says:
    January 30, 2015 at 2:43 pm

    Great work but didn’t get it but there wasn’t destroy in the past but I think you did excellent. 🙂

  11. smarm1 says:
    February 4, 2015 at 3:13 pm

    Great story, lovely powerful words

  13. Reanna :) says:
    February 5, 2015 at 1:15 pm

    amazing but hard to breathe at times 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

  14. Alice says:
    February 5, 2015 at 1:20 pm

    really good but you might want to improve by adding some full stops and commas e.t.c.

    well done 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂

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