You know I think it’s a great piece of work Hollie super work
Great work but try and use punctuation and make sure you check your work at the end youv’e made some mistakes but really good effort 🙂 by cc
A lovely peice of work. You missed a few capital letters, pleqase remember ‘I’ is a name.Quick question is his life begging or beginning?
Nice work Hollie! Keep up the good work!
LilyMae.
Hi Hollie good pice of work well done hollie my bff xxxxx
Well done Hollie a lovely peice of work and very nice connectives. From chloe h
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You know I think it’s a great piece of work Hollie super work
Great work but try and use punctuation and make sure you check your work at the end youv’e made some mistakes but really good effort 🙂 by cc
A lovely peice of work. You missed a few capital letters, pleqase remember ‘I’ is a name.Quick question is his life begging or beginning?
Nice work Hollie!
Keep up the good work!
LilyMae.
Hi Hollie good pice of work well done hollie my bff xxxxx
Well done Hollie a lovely peice of work and very nice connectives. From chloe h