Helin Notes From The Piano

2 Responses to Helin Notes From The Piano

1. ryanh says:

   January 18, 2013 at 7:51 pm

   I think it was good hope u keep up the work from Hollie
2. mshuttleworth says:

   January 19, 2013 at 10:34 am

   Well done Helin, a very romantic piece of writing. Try to extend some of your sentences using ambitious connectives such as however,meanwhile or although.

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