WELL DONE I LOVED IT!!!!! i dont know how you did it but it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo intrasting well 100% FROM MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEExxxx
Your work has been wonderful and very emotional this week! Well doe. It even brought a tear to my old cynical eye.
Try using a few more ambitous connectives such as however or whereas.
well done chlo it was a lovely pecie of work i dont no how you done it I really liked it it made me cry soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much could you use more connectives from Jessie
Great work Chloe this piece of writing made me cry for 10 minutes or more ,I don’t now . But still Good work Chloe!
WELL DONE I LOVED IT!!!!! i dont know how you did it but it was sooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo intrasting well 100% FROM MEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEExxxx
Your work has been wonderful and very emotional this week! Well doe. It even brought a tear to my old cynical eye.
Try using a few more ambitous connectives such as however or whereas.
well done chlo it was a lovely pecie of work i dont no how you done it I really liked it it made me cry soooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo much could you use more connectives from Jessie