Did not understand why it started referring to a strange boot which is not mentioned later.
Interesting until it got to the tall man speaking, struggled to understand the words he spoke and why he was included.
Good idea to make it a dream but would have been better to leave out the man and included more about what happened in the pond.
Did not understand why it started referring to a strange boot which is not mentioned later.
Interesting until it got to the tall man speaking, struggled to understand the words he spoke and why he was included.
Good idea to make it a dream but would have been better to leave out the man and included more about what happened in the pond.