There is no explaination as to why the the high wall and large puddle did not appear big to the brothers. It would be better to have less description of their journey and more about the dummy they saw which appeared in different forms.
That was some imaginative story Jamie!! The title would lure lots of readers in!! Next time you could tell us more about the story. 🙂
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There is no explaination as to why the the high wall and large puddle did not appear big to the brothers.
It would be better to have less description of their journey and more about the dummy they saw which appeared in different forms.
That was some imaginative story Jamie!! The title would lure lots of readers in!! Next time you could tell us more about the story. 🙂