Diary Entry

Posted on October 13, 2020 by Deleted User
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4 Responses to Diary Entry

  1. barrs says:
    October 13, 2020 at 9:33 am

    I like all the questions in first person

  2. muirz says:
    October 13, 2020 at 10:07 am

    It is AMAZING maybe you could add some more adjectives but apart from that great.

  3. ashbe says:
    October 13, 2020 at 10:07 am

    I like the fact that there was lots of details.
    Lots of questions.
    Sounds exciting though

  4. zedda says:
    October 13, 2020 at 10:10 am

    I like the way that you wrote your story George. There is minor mistakes but mistakes are your friend and they make your work more unique

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