really cool I really like how its not about pirates but you could describe the scenery a bit more I also like how no one gets hurt seb
I really like your story because of all the description.
Can you make the characters a bit clearer? You did really well.
great storyline thing but this iiisss supposed to be a typing thing so i can’t complain you might however want to let us know which one’s which but great names like Emmuel and Dylan or Thomas!
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really cool
I really like how its not about pirates but you could describe the scenery a bit more I also like how no one gets
hurt seb
I really like your story because of all the description.
Can you make the characters a bit clearer?
You did really well.
great storyline thing but this iiisss supposed to be a typing thing so i can’t complain you might however want to let us know which one’s which but great names like Emmuel and Dylan or Thomas!