Wow! This is fantastic writing Elettra Sofia. You included lots of different writing devices as well as remembering the format of a letter. Some of your sentences need a bit of work, as some of them are longer than they need to be. Proof reading will really help. Well done for the ambitious choice of words.
Wow! This is fantastic writing Elettra Sofia. You included lots of different writing devices as well as remembering the format of a letter. Some of your sentences need a bit of work, as some of them are longer than they need to be. Proof reading will really help. Well done for the ambitious choice of words.
I like that you put in all your punctuation in.You forgot to put the five or six words.The story was so interesting.
Great text love it best -thing good detail
Well done Elettra I love the story and the letter it is so detailed . Maybe you can read it again?