It was such a descriptive story Molly. I liked the part were the gorilla wrecked the place and the picture of
f the baby gorilla. you could probably improve nothing at all because it was a lovely story for my opinion.
I liked that you included detail like were the baby was born and why it was special occasion.I think you need to read over you work. I liked that you included hard words like a fortnight ago because it improved you’re righting .From Rio and Lilly
I really liked how you described your characters and your settings. A little more work on your spellings.I liked how you added pictures.
I liked how a baby gorilla caused so much destruction.I think you could improve on spelling.I like how you upgraded your words.
Amazing story!I loved it so much i want to read it over and over again and cute picture.
i love it so much sooooo cute and creative 🙂 🙂
It was such a descriptive story Molly. I liked the part were the gorilla wrecked the place and the picture of
f the baby gorilla. you could probably improve nothing at all because it was a lovely story for my opinion.
Please focus more on your spelling because I can’t understand your writing,I liked your story it was very relaxing.by Cinar & Tahmeda
Cute love it.
I liked that you included detail like were the baby was born and why it was special occasion.I think you need to read over you work. I liked that you included hard words like a fortnight ago because it improved you’re righting .From Rio and Lilly