You have forgotten some spaces and have missplet a few words like: ventrally, wasmy, somethingthen and rembred.
‘I really didn’t want to do this HE.’ You switch from 3rd to 1st person. There are also there are a lot of spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes, and the second one doesn’t show much emotion.
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You have forgotten some spaces and have missplet a few words like: ventrally, wasmy, somethingthen and rembred.
‘I really didn’t want to do this HE.’ You switch from 3rd to 1st person. There are also there are a lot of spelling, punctuation and grammar mistakes, and the second one doesn’t show much emotion.