You say load when i think you meant loud
I really like it but what do you mean by cheered?
This is really good but some words are put together, make sure you check your two paragraphs before publishing other a lot of words will be stuck to together.
You really don’t need to publish the steps.
I really did enjoy reading your story but some of the words were stuck together. The description of how your characters spoke was really impressive.
This is really good so words are put together. And the bottom paragraph is angry or upset.
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You say load when i think you meant loud
I really like it but what do you mean by cheered?
This is really good but some words are put together, make sure you check your two paragraphs before publishing other a lot of words will be stuck to together.
You really don’t need to publish the steps.
I really did enjoy reading your story but some of the words were stuck together.
The description of how your characters spoke was really impressive.
This is really good so words are put together. And the bottom paragraph is angry or upset.