Wow what great stories, you have going on here because you have used good describing words. Keep up the great work .
On story one when it said ” i hope your happy” recovered her composure. maybe add more stuff before recovered for example how the person said that like angrily, and probably also put ‘she’ before recovered.
‘Don’t forget’ What? I got your first story but the second one did not really make sense. I like it though.
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Wow what great stories, you have going on here because you have used good describing words. Keep up the great work .
On story one when it said ” i hope your happy” recovered her composure. maybe add more stuff before recovered for example how the person said that like angrily, and probably also put ‘she’ before recovered.
‘Don’t forget’ What? I got your first story but the second one did not really make sense. I like it though.