This story in so good because you’ve made it so suspicious and interesting. You’ve missed out so some full stops but it’s still really good!
its really creepy and it was very suspenseful,it really got me thinking.
I like your story, but some of it does not make sense, and you did not really use any adjectives apart from shadowy.
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This story in so good because you’ve made it so suspicious and interesting. You’ve missed out so some full stops but it’s still really good!
its really creepy and it was very suspenseful,it really got me thinking.
I like your story, but some of it does not make sense, and you did not really use any adjectives apart from shadowy.