I enjoyed reading your story as it builds up suspense but you didn’t space out your words and I like that you put in times that has really happened.
i really like your ending
Yours is really good, i like the way you describe the person.
Hi Danir, Great story and it was nice that you included school journey on it! Well done.
I really like yours it good and it made me fell like i was there
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I enjoyed reading your story as it builds up suspense but you didn’t space out your words and I like that you put in times that has really happened.
i really like your ending
Yours is really good, i like the way you describe the person.
Hi Danir,
Great story and it was nice that you included school journey on it! Well done.
I really like yours it good and it made me fell like i was there