Hansel Gretal biy Ela

5 Responses to Hansel Gretal biy Ela

1. jonem says:

   June 16, 2017 at 1:01 pm

   check spelling mistakes but great story
2. hoqut says:

   June 16, 2017 at 1:03 pm

   Ela your story is nise but maby you can put a few more sentent.
3. hussw says:

   June 16, 2017 at 1:05 pm

   nice writing
4. yildn says:

   June 16, 2017 at 1:06 pm

   I love your story
5. danir1 says:

   June 16, 2017 at 1:12 pm

   I,t is good but you need to finish.

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