Hanzel and Gretal by finley

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9 Responses to Hanzel and Gretal by finley

  1. enveh says:

    did you mean hansel

  2. jonem says:

    Great story Finley

  3. yildn says:

    I like your story but I think the writing is a bit to small

  4. marca says:

    great job fin
    you have to correct hungury

  5. tasyc says:

    That is a super good story you are a very very good good good good boy.

  6. bagha1 says:

    i really liked your story but you must finish it after they…good ideas.

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