well done Pierre I like your story it is kinda sad and good at the same time maybe you could of added more of what happen`s but other than that it is fantastic!
This so Fantastic in the future try and use some more openers once again its brill By Freddy
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well done Pierre I like your story it is kinda sad and good at the same time maybe you could of added more of what happen`s but other than that it is fantastic!
This so Fantastic in the future try and use some more openers once again its brill By Freddy