We really liked the story line but you are missing a lot of punctuation and some words are missing. We think you should have checked over your work.
Well done Amal and Rene you are missing punctuation and this didn’t make sense the fog was covering we eyes but otherwise it was really good.
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We really liked the story line but you are missing a lot of punctuation and some words are missing. We think you should have checked over your work.
Well done Amal and Rene you are missing punctuation and this didn’t make sense the fog was covering we eyes but otherwise it was really good.