Well done!!! We loved the descriptions and the how you made up the setting but you needed to use some punctuation to break it up. Otherwise it was fantastic!
That was SO good!
We really liked your word choices. Although you are missing punctuation and you could of had more descriptive language.
The story is so imaginative and also we give 4 1/2 stars. Well done!
Well done!!! We loved the descriptions and the how you made up the setting but you needed to use some punctuation to break it up. Otherwise it was fantastic!
It is really amazing.
That was SO good!
We really liked your word choices. Although you are missing punctuation and you could of had more descriptive language.
The story is so imaginative and also we give 4 1/2 stars. Well done!