Our visit to the London Assembly by Rami

6 Responses to Our visit to the London Assembly by Rami

1. guemb says:

   January 10, 2013 at 8:14 pm

   A few spelling mistakes but apart from that it’s good
2. keita009.206 says:

   January 14, 2013 at 9:46 pm

   Hi Rami, it was lovely to read your work but you made little mistakes that you could of fixed.
3. saleh says:

   January 21, 2013 at 12:22 pm

   that was good Rami you only had one mistake
4. lawsf says:

   January 21, 2013 at 2:16 pm

   Great work Rami, I’d just say you had a couple of spelling mistakes but apart from that it’s great.
5. chaku says:

   January 21, 2013 at 2:34 pm

   HI RAMI IT WAS GOOD YOU HAD ONE MISTAKE.BUT STILL A GOOD WRITTING
6. ellis says:

   February 5, 2013 at 11:47 am

   It is ok but quite a few mistakes so be careful and a few adjectives (WOW words) and remember how to spell definintley. Practice makes perfect!!

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