Grandparents by Jack

Posted on November 27, 2012 by Deleted User
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12 Responses to Grandparents by Jack

  1. ellis says:
    January 9, 2013 at 2:56 pm

    I like it because it is really funny and has a good use of commas and sentence structure.

  2. keita009.206 says:
    January 9, 2013 at 2:57 pm

    LOVE IT,I LIKED THE WAY YOU USED THAT HOMOUR THAT MAKES ALL OF US LAUGH

    COOL JACK

  3. whith says:
    January 9, 2013 at 3:04 pm

    it was good but it was a bit unrealistic because of the 100 cans of coke and the staying up till midnight.

  4. guemm says:
    January 11, 2013 at 12:03 pm

    I really loved the writing, but it was wierd when it said they let me have 100 cans of coke.

  5. abdim says:
    January 14, 2013 at 8:45 pm

    I really liked the way that it was laid and that you talked about your grandparents cooking

  6. barnb says:
    January 16, 2013 at 11:55 am

    Well done Jack, amazing sentence structure and good using of commas, Keep up the good work 🙂

  7. jackt1 says:
    January 16, 2013 at 12:02 pm

    Nice story jack I liked the food your grandparents cook mmmm probably the best part

  8. guemb says:
    January 17, 2013 at 6:37 pm

    Well done jack. Lovely work!! 🙂 😀
    love the humour

  9. Candice says:
    September 22, 2016 at 1:32 pm

    Well done Jack amazing work.

  10. lottyx09 says:
    September 22, 2016 at 1:34 pm

    wow I wish I had grandparents like that

  11. dave says:
    September 22, 2016 at 1:40 pm

    like it funny

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