Amal 100 wc

2 Responses to Amal 100 wc

1. omarl says:

   December 6, 2016 at 12:23 pm

   I like your title it really makes the story flow.
2. buchc says:

   December 6, 2016 at 12:24 pm

   Great story and I like how you ended it with a short sentence. The only thing that doesn’t make sense is when you wrote ‘ to see what see was doing’ apart from that its fantastic

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