Great suspense! But you should probably give more detail.
Good, but at the end of your sentence there no full stop. But well done
It was wonderful but you have spelling mistakes.
Well done Teon I like your story about Zeus the only thing I;m going to moan about is that you forgot to leave a space between two words.
From Archie
That was a good story Teon but i think you can improve on your spelling.
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Great suspense! But you should probably give more detail.
Good, but at the end of your sentence there no full stop. But well done
It was wonderful but you have spelling mistakes.
Well done Teon I like your story about Zeus the only thing I;m going to moan about is that you forgot to leave a space between two words.
From Archie
That was a good story Teon but i think you can improve on your spelling.