This poem is good because the description is well explained. I think it should have been a bit longer.
I like your poem because it has loads of detail and how you explained the apple although, I think you should have made it a little bit longer.
Leah.L
Wow! this good. Maybe start with a capital letter and if you need more words maybe use a thesaurus! VERY GOOD Sophie and Alanis
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This poem is good because the description is well explained. I think it should have been a bit longer.
I like your poem because it has loads of detail and how you explained the apple although, I think you should have made it a little bit longer.
Leah.L
Wow! this good. Maybe start with a capital letter and if you need more words maybe use a thesaurus!
VERY GOOD
Sophie and Alanis