I liked the part were you said ‘sorry friend’ because that was so kind. What you could improve was the begging when you said me and my ignoring friend that dose’t make sense. But every thing was good.
i liked the part when you said “i knock on his door but he did not answer so i text him.so what i mean is that you done two ways to solve it to be frends again.What you could improve on is that when you said me and my ignoring friend it dose’t make sence. but the story was still good.
I liked the part were you said ‘sorry friend’ because that was so kind. What you could improve was the begging when you said me and my ignoring friend that dose’t make sense. But every thing was good.
wow said you have a fantastic story and you but fullstop at the right place
that was awsome said, i think u could improve your spelling and punctuation, but apart from that it was B R I L L I A N T
i liked the part when you said “i knock on his door but he did not answer so i text him.so what i mean is that you done two ways to solve it to be frends again.What you could improve on is that when you said me and my ignoring friend it dose’t make sence. but the story was still good.