Amazing job Lukas, I loved the really strong points you put into your paragraph, for e.g. “If he doesn’t go to school, that limits his knowledge, and if you limit his knowledge, limits his future”
However, the thing that you need to improve on is your punctuation and common sense.
Otis
Well done Lukas you have all the capital letters , full stops and you have written what was better for August 🙂
Amazing job Lukas, I loved the really strong points you put into your paragraph, for e.g. “If he doesn’t go to school, that limits his knowledge, and if you limit his knowledge, limits his future”
However, the thing that you need to improve on is your punctuation and common sense.
Otis
Good job Lukas I liked the way you explained that August should not be home schooled and why.