This piece of writing is great although,you could have wrote more about why he should stay in school overall, it was great!
Amal I think your writing was really good you have used good explanation and filled in every detail but I think at the end you used fear to many times.
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This piece of writing is great although,you could have wrote more about why he should stay in school overall, it was great!
Amal I think your writing was really good you have used good explanation and filled in every detail but I think at the end you used fear to many times.