Wow, Ruby! Your argument is really convincing, and you lowered the ‘against’ points as much as possible. I really like the way started some of your sentences – on the other hand, even so, and my favorite is ‘Thus’, a word that has hardly been used in the English language since the Victorian times! (Which is why I really like it.) Only problem, is you missed a couple of commas – which comes when you don’t check you work enough! Other than that, amazing work, just amazing!
Wow, Ruby! I love your work, you made your argument really powerful and strong! Only problem, is you missed a couple of commas. But anyway great work all round. 🙂
Wow, Ruby! Your argument is really convincing, and you lowered the ‘against’ points as much as possible. I really like the way started some of your sentences – on the other hand, even so, and my favorite is ‘Thus’, a word that has hardly been used in the English language since the Victorian times! (Which is why I really like it.) Only problem, is you missed a couple of commas – which comes when you don’t check you work enough! Other than that, amazing work, just amazing!
Wow, Ruby! I love your work, you made your argument really powerful and strong! Only problem, is you missed a couple of commas. But anyway great work all round. 🙂