Sumayyah you have done really well but some of your sentences do not make sense so next time look over your work before publishing. I give you 8/10 well done
Sumayyah you have done really well but some of your sentences do not make sense and you did not put any commas into your work so next time look over your work before publishing. I give you 8/10 well done remember to always check over your work from Tamzin.
Its really good but at the top it says I don’t want to leave this door which doesn’t make sense but you could write I don’t want to go through that door its waiting…
Sumayyah you need to make sure you look back over your work before you publish it because some of the sentences don’t make sense
Sumayyah you have done really well but some of your sentences do not make sense so next time look over your work before publishing. I give you 8/10 well done
Sumayyah you have done really well but some of your sentences do not make sense and you did not put any commas into your work so next time look over your work before publishing. I give you 8/10 well done remember to always check over your work from Tamzin.
Its really good but at the top it says I don’t want to leave this door which doesn’t make sense but you could write I don’t want to go through that door its waiting…