Great Job Ella I really like the suspense you added.
And the way you put a ellipsis at the end.
However you used misery twice and I think you used a lot of commas.
Superb work Ella! I liked the interesting way you set the work out. However make sure you add suitable punctuation to your text, for example, a ! after ‘fight, hide or scream’.
I love your poem but next time try not to use misery twice.
Great Job Ella I really like the suspense you added.
And the way you put a ellipsis at the end.
However you used misery twice and I think you used a lot of commas.
By Vincent
Superb work Ella! I liked the interesting way you set the work out. However make sure you add suitable punctuation to your text, for example, a ! after ‘fight, hide or scream’.
Wow Ella great work and good words and punctuation