Excellent work Aisha
i’m glad i’m not in this situation,your piece of work is great because you have made the reader know how it feels to be in that persons shoes.
I really like your poem but I think you should have commas for the once or twice sentence and I think you should get rid of the bits after report it and maybe add something else and then it would be a fantastic poem.
I love your poem I love the bit that says” I know what is waiting for me” lovely piece of work
maybe change the “how dare they” bit
lovely piece of work though
Excellent work Aisha
i’m glad i’m not in this situation,your piece of work is great because you have made the reader know how it feels to be in that persons shoes.
I really like your poem but I think you should have commas for the once or twice sentence and I think you should get rid of the bits after report it and maybe add something else and then it would be a fantastic poem.