Good diary entry, you have clearly explained how Leonard felt towards Alex however, the changing colours and flashing writing does not make it easy to read. I really like how you have started a sentence with vigorously. Make sure you re read your work to make sure all your sentences make sense, check your second to last sentence.
Try adding in what your plan is to send him back to Bosnia.
For Example: Punch me and get away with it, yeah right just wait till I tell dad, he’ll be back to Bosnia before you know it
Good diary entry, you have clearly explained how Leonard felt towards Alex however, the changing colours and flashing writing does not make it easy to read. I really like how you have started a sentence with vigorously. Make sure you re read your work to make sure all your sentences make sense, check your second to last sentence.
ok sir, I put the show in my big write.
Ok sir, I will check my work from now on 🙂 😉
Try adding in what your plan is to send him back to Bosnia.
For Example: Punch me and get away with it, yeah right just wait till I tell dad, he’ll be back to Bosnia before you know it