This was amazing but maybe you could make this poem bigger because i love the suspense and i wish there was more so that I can read it.
It was brilliant Aisha. Try to use more full stops. I like the way you used ellipses. Also can you try to make your poem bigger.
Well done the only thing is you should change is putting ‘Heart pounding like a drum’ on the same line.
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This was amazing but maybe you could make this poem bigger because i love the suspense and i wish there was more so that I can read it.
It was brilliant Aisha. Try to use more full stops. I like the way you used ellipses. Also can you try to make your poem bigger.
Well done the only thing is you should change is putting ‘Heart pounding like a drum’ on the same line.