A good story and great powerful words, however check some of your spellings and you may need to revise your use of commas. Nevertheless, it’s an interesting story.
A good story and great powerful words, however check some of your spellings and you may need to revise your use of commas. Nevertheless, it’s an interesting story.
Fabulous work Archie, I have finally saw a suspenseful poem. It had a very good opening and ending, I didn’t see any ellipsis, Anyways over all I thought it was excellent poem well done.
Hi thanks for the comment but this piece of writing isn’t a poem it is a suspense text and you don’t always need ellipsis in this type of writing. Anyway thanks
Good work Archie but you need more full stops like this.
The peace of work was good. But make sure that you spell probably I would give that a 9/10
A good story and great powerful words, however check some of your spellings and you may need to revise your use of commas. Nevertheless, it’s an interesting story.
A good story and great powerful words, however check some of your spellings and you may need to revise your use of commas. Nevertheless, it’s an interesting story.
Fabulous work Archie, I have finally saw a suspenseful poem. It had a very good opening and ending, I didn’t see any ellipsis, Anyways over all I thought it was excellent poem well done.
Hi thanks for the comment but this piece of writing isn’t a poem it is a suspense text and you don’t always need ellipsis in this type of writing. Anyway thanks
From Archie