I really like the way you used ‘but it mad my tongue tingle’ because popping candy does make your tongue tingle. The description of your day was really good.
lol, I liked it but I think u should of added a bit more description as everything happened quick x
I really like this especially the part where you started with more chores!!! P.S~ Popping Candy, Coke, Chewing Gum and Refreshers = Your faves = Lol
Good Piece of writing! Quite hard to read but other than that it is a good piece of writing!
I like it when you made it sound like you were actually writing a diary. <3 🙂
My eyes hurt because of the bright colours.
I like the way that you described everything that you bought 🙂
I like it when you started with “More chores!” but I still think you should’ve added more description♥♥ 🙂 well done though
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I really like the way you used ‘but it mad my tongue tingle’ because popping candy does make your tongue tingle. The description of your day was really good.
lol, I liked it but I think u should of added a bit more description as everything happened quick x
I really like this especially the part where you started with more chores!!!
P.S~ Popping Candy, Coke, Chewing Gum and Refreshers = Your faves = Lol
Good Piece of writing! Quite hard to read but other than that it is a good piece of writing!
I like it when you made it sound like you were actually writing a diary. <3 🙂
My eyes hurt because of the bright colours.
I like the way that you described everything that you bought 🙂
I like it when you started with “More chores!” but I still think you should’ve added more description♥♥ 🙂 well done though