OMG it is great there is nothing I would change
I like the use of tongue tingle it is very very very very descriptive and like that well done:) :):):):):):):)
Wow! I like the way you used the prompt to create the type of story you like to write and the type of story people like to read!
It great but you didn’t use the line ‘but it made my tongue tingle’ when you were supposed to.
This is amazing! I love the description and how you used the phrase “it made my tongue tingle!” A few words were missing. But other than that, I loved it!
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OMG it is great there is nothing I would change
I like the use of tongue tingle it is very very very very descriptive and like that
well done:) :):):):):):):)
Wow! I like the way you used the prompt to create the type of story you like to write and the type of story people like to read!
It great but you didn’t use the line ‘but it made my tongue tingle’ when you were supposed to.
This is amazing! I love the description and how you used the phrase “it made my tongue tingle!” A few words were missing. But other than that, I loved it!