This is so cute! I like the fairytale twist, although, some punctuation is missing. Other than that, great job!
Good Work! Some homophone mistakes like blue instead of blew. Also some other spelling mistakes but overall the story =line is great and I think it is really good!
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This is so cute! I like the fairytale twist, although, some punctuation is missing. Other than that, great job!
Good Work! Some homophone mistakes like blue instead of blew. Also some other spelling mistakes but overall the story =line is great and I think it is really good!