Love the short sentences Amy 🙂 you have used great adjectives you made a mistake at the very end you said “hear” instead of here. But well done 🙂 xx
Love the beginning of your 100 word challenge really pulls you in! However the only thing I could spot wrong was at the end you used the wrong here. Otherwise GREAT!!!
Love the short sentences Amy 🙂 you have used great adjectives you made a mistake at the very end you said “hear” instead of here. But well done 🙂 xx
Love the beginning of your 100 word challenge really pulls you in! However the only thing I could spot wrong was at the end you used the wrong here. Otherwise GREAT!!!
I want more I love the way you wrote this Amy and I also love the way you started it:):):):):)
Amy I would like to hear more and I like the start. 🙂
I loved it! It leaves you on a real cliff hanger. But you have had a mistake ‘How, Why? its meant to be ‘How? Why?’ Other that that AMAZINGGG
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Amazing Alex i love your cliffhanger but what on earth is a humble jumble!!!!!!