Riley

5 Responses to Riley

1. haywb says:

   April 24, 2015 at 10:33 am

   I like how it ends on a cliff hanger and that a man killed himself in fear.
2. dervi says:

   April 24, 2015 at 10:33 am

   I liked the cliff hanger and the overall story. However, you were missing commas. Other than that, it was great.
3. aliz says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:11 pm

   I like this writing it is so good I hope you would like to do part 2.
4. Livs♥ says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:12 pm

   Nice story Riley I love it♥

   from OliviaT 🙂
5. dobbo says:

   April 24, 2015 at 1:13 pm

   hi don’t know if my key board is working rhfgjerguyetfiefgfgferjhgfueyttuywgfkjdhbgi

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