Brilliant story ,
I really like his super powers and how he is extremely kind and the end of the story is really good
well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the part “when chaos begins…” It shows your understanding of this type of hero/quest language – it’s an ‘epic’ way to present the idea. Well done Ahmed; keep it up!
Nice story, I like the part where it mentions that whenever chaos begins, he goes into the future and stops it!!
NEEDS THE ORIGIN
Except for that great story.
I like it but again no backstory 🙁
I like the idea of him being able to see into the future, however It doesn’t flow very well it is all jumbled up. Otherwise a good piece of writing!
but I defiantly love every thing else 🙂 🙂 🙂 🙂
Brilliant story ,
I really like his super powers and how he is extremely kind and the end of the story is really good
well done!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I love the part “when chaos begins…” It shows your understanding of this type of hero/quest language – it’s an ‘epic’ way to present the idea. Well done Ahmed; keep it up!