This is a great piece of writing as you included both appearance and personality and has a good purpose. I would like to ask why there is a no.1 at the beginning. Overall, this is a good piece of writing. PS. Love the photo
This is really good I want to read part 2. 🙂
Great Piece of writing a couple of parts which don’t make sense but overall I love the idea! Good Job Riley
So funny I like how he liked evil until something bad happened.
GOOD STORY my name is jeff
I loved the back story but you didn’t describe their appearance. You spelt two wrong but other than that it was great 🙂
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This is a great piece of writing as you included both appearance and personality and has a good purpose. I would like to ask why there is a no.1 at the beginning. Overall, this is a good piece of writing.
PS. Love the photo
This is really good I want to read part 2. 🙂
Great Piece of writing a couple of parts which don’t make sense but overall I love the idea!
Good Job Riley
So funny I like how he liked evil until something bad happened.
GOOD STORY my name is jeff
I loved the back story but you didn’t describe their appearance. You spelt two wrong but other than that it was great 🙂