I like that the person who is talking about the hero is an orphan.
Really good description and you explained what she looked like really well. However, the last phrase “strong as a lion, fierce as a king,” doesn’t really fit. But other than that, We loved it 🙂
I can’t read it 🙁
Amazing but you didn’t do the backstory and I can’t really read it.
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I like that the person who is talking about the hero is an orphan.
Really good description and you explained what she looked like really well. However, the last phrase “strong as a lion, fierce as a king,” doesn’t really fit. But other than that, We loved it 🙂
I can’t read it 🙁
Amazing but you didn’t do the backstory and I can’t really read it.