HUNTING FOR YOUR LIFE lia

3 Responses to HUNTING FOR YOUR LIFE lia

1. hille says:

   March 13, 2015 at 2:16 pm

   Hi Lia,
   I love the name of your story! I also like the way you describe things eg; Gabriel had long hair, dark green eyes and was used to fun and friends-only once had she felt sadness. The story is amazing but I think mabey you could edit it ( spelling and punctuation.) Which country is this story set in?
   Great blog,
   From Eva
2. guema says:

   March 13, 2015 at 2:21 pm

   I like the way you described the characters like Gabrial was curious and her sis was weird.I also iked it when you described the woods like it was dark . You kind of rushed it so you missed afew words.
3. nguyy says:

   March 13, 2015 at 2:23 pm

   I like the way you described the characters like Gabril
   was curious and sis was weird. I also I liked it when you described the wood like it was dark. you kind
   of rushed it so you missed afew words.

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