The dark days in the woods Leila

2 Responses to The dark days in the woods Leila

1. chowm says:

   March 13, 2015 at 2:20 pm

   hi Leila
   I like how you described Izzy and Harry eg: once there was a small and short girl called Izzy and I like how you used time connectives and verbs but next time don’t change the font colour in the middle of the story Red and Yellow and why did Izzy’s mother and izzy go to get hot chocolate?
2. curtc says:

   July 8, 2015 at 9:11 am

   Next time maybe write a 100 word challenge instead of a story so even it out. Maybe one week you do a 100 word challenge then the next week do a story.

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